Class F of Writing III by Hajriati Amaliah.

NARRATIVE AND DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
BY
HAJRIATI AMALIAH
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IIIF
The Narrative Composition

Topic : Tina's Birthday Party

Introduction : Tina is my closed friend

She is nineteenth years old

Beautiful girl and kindhearted

Student in IJNM

We lovely each other

Body : - The events before her party

1. Her birthday on 5 January 1988

2. She prepared all of anything for her party

3. Invited all of her friends

4. Her parents can’t follow her party because they must work

- The events as long as her birthday party

1. The party was celebrated in Sentosa Restaurant

2. She disappointed to her parents

3. All of her friends gathered and gave her congratulation

4. Suddemly, her parents came into her party

5. She surprised and kissed her parents whilw cried

- The events after her birthday party

1. She enjoyed her party

2. Her parents gave her a gift, that is a computer

3. Her friends pray for her happiness and healthy

4. The party finished at 12.30 PM

Conclusion : She got many presents from her friends.

It is apleasant party, she was looked happy.

She hopes ti celebrate her birthday party next year.

Tina's Birthday Party

Tina is my close friend. I have been being her friend from Senior High School until now. She is nineteenth years old and tomorrow is her birthday. Tina is a beautiful girl and kindhearted. She always help me if I get a trouble not only in my money problem, but also in my lesson. Even though we are in different University but we always keep our friendship. I hope that we always can lovely each other.

Tina's birthday on 5 January 1988 and she called me that she will celebrate her birthday. She prepared all of anything for her party, for example the birthday cake, place, decoration, etc. she was looking busy. Her parents gave freedom for her to organized her party by herself. It was purposed to give her to invited all of her friends. But, she didn't guess that her parents can't follow her birthday party because they must work. It made her shock.

Even though her parents can't follow her party but it must be celebrated because she was preparing for anything. It was celebrated in Sentosa Restaurant. According to the plan, her party will begin at 07.0O PM. Actually, she left disappointed to her parents but she can't do anything. I went to Sentosa with her by taxi, she looks sad. We arrived there at 07.15 PM and then waited her guests. After that, all of her friends gathered to give her congratulation. And then the patty was started. In the middle of the party, her parents come into her party. Suddenly, she surprised and kissed her parents while cried.

Nest, she didn't guess again that her parents were planning to gave her surprise. She wasn't crying again and enjoyed her party. Her parents gave her a gift, that is a computer. They said that they came late because they bought that computer after asked permission from their office. Tina felt very happy. She said to me that it is an unforgettable birthday a long her life. The party finished at 12.30 PM .

Tina got many presents from her friends. I gave her a silver wrist watch. Directly, she opened my gift and said thanks to me. The other presents for example diary, frame, cloth, etc. I though that it is a pleasant and good party, especially for Tina. She never to stop for smile as long as her party. She hopes that she can celebrate her birthday next year.

The Descriptive Composition

Topic :
Finery Shop

Introduction :
-Makassar Mall area, busy place of all day
-Bedlam of people and various vehicle
-Shopping centre, commercial area
-Sell things for necessary of people
-One of the most crowded shop-finery shop

Body :
-Finery shop is modern-fashioned
Glass door, square
Sanitary, shimmer lamps
Display windows show the latest fashions
Crowded, full of music
Stand lamps sparkling of each corner

Discount in these fashion
Place fir customers to gatters with their friend

Flov of customers to shopping around or t buy something

Buzz of conversation.

Conclusion :
Finery shop offers fashions differently
Give satisfaction to customers

Good quality fashions, import goods

Heart of the shoppers

Finery Shop

Every day, the situation of Makassar Mall is crowd. It is a busy place of all day and fasmonable section of the city. Bedlam always decorate this area. Many people and various velucle went back and forth over there. There are many shops ceuter was full of commodity that day sell and usually ii called as a commercial area These shops sell anything for based need and other necessary things, for example staple and various foods, clothes, glassware, electronics, etc. Big shops until stands was full of this area. Modern area with many buildings and skyscraper. One of the most crowded shop is finery shop. Finery shop is a famous shop and sell clother fashionably.

Finery shop is modern-fashioned. It is a large place, glass door structure with various paint wall decoration. Compared with other shops, the finery shop is modernistic. That place is saniting and glass wall with shimmer lamps hangs over at the each windows. A big name board was written the name of this shop to hang up and surrounded by small lamps. In front of this shop has a large park. Place for costumers to park their velucles.

This shop made me interest to go there. More over, in display windows show the lates fshirus to add my curiousity. When I came into shop, the situation is crowded and full music. A security nd cashier place are near from the door. Stand lamp sparkling as a decoration in each corner. Above all, who made me very happy is discount in these fashions. Sundenly, a shopkeeper to welcome me with her smile familiary. She allow me, shopping around fasions that I like.

In finery shop was devided into 2 parts, the right side and the left side. At the right side are clother for children, young and party. To the left side are clothes for men, women dan work. Big mirror in each parts. A sound system is setting in behind of rack. The costumes was fell each other and buzz of conversation. It is a place for them to gathers with their friends and family. The owners shop is visible happy because his shop was flow of costumers, not only just for shopping around but also to buy something.

Every day, Finery shop offers to costumer for fashion differently. It make them happy and satisty with the good clothes and good service. Especially with the discount where were than the other shops. Beside that, the price is cheaper and more compete than the others. asions in this shop are good quality and some of them are imported from abroad. Because that. Finary shop can be heart of the shopper. They always remember it if they will go there again.