Narrative and Descriptive Essays by Akhmad (III C Class)

AKHMAD WRITING III

10535 1953 06

III C

NARRATIVE ESSAY

Topic :

- Going to the Beach

Introduction :

- Location

- I left by Car

- I went to the hotel near the beach

Body :

- Enjoying the activity

- The looked painting

- There are some foreign tourists on the beach

Conclusion :

- start going to the beach

GOING TO THE BEACH

Last week, my friends and I had a picnic. I went to the beach. I left my home by car at four o’clock in the afternoon. My friends drove carefully. I arrived at the beach at six o’clock in the evening. Then I went to the hotel near the beach. I spent my night there.

On the next day, we went to the beach. I went on foot because the hotel is not more than a kilometer from the beach. My friends and I started early in the morning we wanted to see the rising sun. After the sun rose up, I enjoy our activities. My friends and I visited a small gallery looking at the paintings hanging on the wall. I was glad because they had never done it before. After seeing paintings, we went to the motel and had lunch together.

At four o’clock in the afternoon, my friends and I started to go to the beach. I went by car. And then, I walked along the seashore. I saw some foreigners and tourists activities. Some of them laid down on the sand. Some had messaged. And the others were surfing. I also swam in the sea. I spent my times two hours on the beach.

My village has gamelan and dance teams for their religion and other ceremonies. The other dance in my village is legong dance. Generally, tourists want to buy these things for themselves and their friends.

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Topic :

- SMK Gunung Sari

Introduction :

- Proud to be student

- There are some departments

- Join Practice

Thesis :

- Practice electronic

Body :

- Especial electronic

- Repaired TV

- Important skill

Conclusion :

- Have many knowledge

- Improve my electronic skill

SMK GUNUNG SARI

I spent my senior high school at SMK Gunung Sari Makassar. There are many students but there are some practice rooms and class rooms. Some class rooms only things such as broom, some pictures, globe, curtain, charts, garbage, cans and table clothes, which could make the class clean and more comfortable.

I felt proud to be a student in SMK Gunung Sari Makassar because it is very famous in Makassar and place among some departments such as, automotive, electricity, and electronic. Meanwhile that important is practice about our department. For adding knowledge, therefore we always held practice in the lab room, especially our electronic department.

Meanwhile studying in the lab is very relaxed because there are many kinds of equipment for practice such as, avometer, cable, PVC, soldier, and tin. Before we start our practice, we should use our practice shirt so that not event accident when we use it in practice in the lab. After that will soon practice but our instructor or our teacher is responsible. I had got turn for repairing TV and checked that it will be operated. During I had found that broken after I repaired and finally it could be operated too.

Afterwards, we had got knowledge about how to repair by using tools. We could also improve our knowledge and skill about electric.