Narrative and Descriptive Essays by Ummul Mu'minin (III C class)

UMMUL MU’MININ WRITING III

10535 1943 06

III C

GROUP 5

NARRATIVE ESSAY

Topic : Ana’s Favorite Sport

Introduction :

- Ana is a student

- Her favorite sport is cycling

- Her friends and she want to practice to join in the cycling tournament

Body :

- Her mother asked her to stay to clean her house

- She resisted her mother’s command

Conclusion :

- Her father allowed her to decide what she wanted to do

- Ana promised to clean her house after finishing her activity

ANA’S FAVORITE SPORT

Ana is a student of Senior High of Bajeng. She is an active girl. She has a favorite sport. It is cycling.

One day, Ana woke up in the morning and felt the morning sunshine across the window of her room. On that day, she ad prepared her stuffs to support her to make his hobby, cycling. After taking a bath, she got dressed and went to the garage. She took her bicycle. After a second, she was ready to pick up her friends, Uni and Linda. They intended to join the cycling tournament at their school next Saturday. Therefore, they had to practice their skill every morning to face that day.

Suddenly, her father cam and asked her to stay at home because their family from Jakarta would come this morning. He asked her to help her mother cleaning the house. He said to Ana that she had to cancel her cycling for that day. Ana said that she didn’t want to stay home because she had made a promise with his friends.

She resisted her father’s command because she really wanted to follow the tournament. On the other hand, she didn’t want anyone disturb her hobby. Her father seemed upset and didn’t say anything.

Her mother came to the garage. He listened to Ana and allowed her to decide what she wanted to do. She didn’t mind if Ana didn’t want to stay home because of that reason. As the consequence, Ana had promised to them to clean the house after finishing her activity. Ana agreed and said that she felt so sorry for leaving them because she had promised to her friends for the activity. She asked her parents permission and promised to them to do this task after she had finished her practice.

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Topic : Rudi’s Home

Introduction :

- Rudi’s home location

- Its condition

- Its home yard

Body :

- The outside of Rudi’s home

- The inside of Rudi’s house

Conclusion :

- The living room should be changed

- Each room should be clean everyday

RUDI’S HOME

Rudi’s home is located at Jl. Faisal, Block F, No. 6. the location is on the center of Faisal Street. We need 15 minutes to get there from Pettarani street. Because of the location lies on the center, it is noisy and crowded. There are many vehicles passing in front of his house. The environment of his house is really nice. Because his neighbor is friendly although they never mood us before, but they smile to us. Everything is easy to get at Rudi’s home because beside of it, there is a store which sells feed and drinks.

Rudi’s home is not too big but not too small. If we see from out side, there is a small garden when we passed his fence. There are Kamboja flower which is yellow and grass which is always neat because he always cut it when it looks higher. Still in the out side, there is a garage to ark his motorcycle. The garage is not too large because it’s just for two motorcycles. Having looked the outside, we move to the inside.

Because Rudi’s home is average so he has to arrange his room as good as possible. When we move inside, we were directly in his living room. It is a unique room because of the position of its room is not usual. The position of the sofa is circle and the table lies on the center of the sofa like a meeting room in an office. Next room is his kitchen. There are cooking tools which are hang on the wall like pan, cooker, and etc. everyday Rudi should cook by himself because his parents do not live in a same house. Near his kitchen, there is his bedroom. His bedroom is really dirty and disorder. The smell of his room is like a smoke. Rudi is a hard smoker. There are many cigarettes where are scattered on the table on the floor. There are many dirty shirts on his bed.

Rudi should rearrange his living room as good as possible because his living room is not too large and he has to change its position. Rudi should clean each room and make them tidy so no more ash of cigarette in each room. He has to buy an ashtray in each room.