group assigment

The first group

1. Nurussyari’ah MD (10535 2060 06)

2. Hajeriati amaliah

3. Syamsinar

4. Hasmiati

5. intihana

The Narrative Composition

Topic: Celebrate the New Year

Introduction:

-My friends and I celebrate the New Year in tanjung Bayang.

-terrible planning

Body:

-Most of us didn’t go there

-Waited Asmi’s uncle

-Arrived in Tanjung Bayang

-Looking for villa

Conclusion:

-We were so happy

-We hope this year is better than last year

Celebrate the New Year

On Monday afternoon, it was the last they of the year. My friend and I had plane to celebrate a new year in Tanjung bayang and beside that we will watch sparkler party too. The planning had complete “Hi ladies submit your money!!! Because we had to rent a filla, transportation cost, buy food and many other “I said” but we get trouble “Hasmi said” what’s going on? “Nunu asked” some of our friends don’t want to go there because they were forbidden by their parent “Hasmi explained.

We waited and waited the Hasmi’s uncle own car because he had promise to take us to go there. We didn’t wait so long. Suddenly, there was o good car stopped I front of us. The man who were glasses opened the window of car was Hasmi’s uncle. We were so surprised because never see him before, we don’t think that Hasmi’s uncle was handsome as soon as Hasmi opened the door, “why were you so long?” Hasmi asked her uncle” sorry because I have an appointment with my secretary “Hasmi’s uncle explained” it must be a secretary sexy. Hasmi mocked “come on ladies, up to the car we have go now” I said when we opened the door, we felt cold because of the AC “oo…. It’s cold” Nunu said”villager, villager”Haje mocked” stupid to mocking each other, we have to having fun, Sinar suggest.

The car stopped in parking area of Tanjung bayang, exactly we arrived in the place that we had plan before. One by one we down the car except Hasmi’s uncle, he just take us to that place. He was returning to his office, we were compactly live our hands and say “thank you and bye-bye”. We shouted we begun walking around the beach, it’s crowded, there were many people in it and we were so happy to see them.

What about if we looking for villa? I suggested “that’s good idea” Nunu said. We had around the beach but we don’t get cheaper villa “the owner villa said that whenever you looking for villa you can’t get a cheaper villa because today is especially celebrate the New Year. The prices of villa have gone up. We left him directly “what about if we rent a bamboo toach” Haje suggested. “ok whatever” sinar said. Suddenly Haje shouting “oh my god isn’t suitable for us, we can’t take a rest this place”. “What do you mean? Our money doesn’t enough, so we just rent this place” Sinar said. After paying, we sat on it and put our things. There are men around that place, so Nunu didn’t brave left it. At 8.00 p, there was handphone ringing, exactly that is Nunu’s handphone it is from Nunu’s friend that she never see before. Nunu opened that messaged and read loudly “where are you at now? I wanna visit you now!!! “oh my god Patra will meet me” it doesn’t matter you can meet in this place “I suggest”. As soon as Nu Nunun reply. “I am in Tanjung Bayang at now, you can go here, I’ll wait you (send). A several minutes later, we meet Nunu’s friend “oh my god, he isn’t suitable that I imagined” Nunu said. So we decide to runway from him.

The distance there was something like camp fire, we approached and exactly just burned garbage. So we were laughing. And than, suddenly we stopped laughing because we heard something that made surprised. Exactly it was 12.00 pm and the skies look at beautiful because of the sparkle. We were so happy to welcome 2008. We hope this year was get better than last year.

The descriptive Composition

Topic: Diamond Mall

Introduction:

-Busy place, commercial place

-Central shopping

-Large parking area

-there are many vehicles people

Body:

-full of AC, good flash light

-transparent wall of restaurant fast food

-different interior of each stand

-supermarket with complete item

-crowded place, buzz of conversation

Conclusion:

-good place for spends the week end

-heart of department store

-One of big crowded place in Makassar

Diamond Mall

Diamond mall is one of commercial area in Makassar city. It is very busy place. It is in the middle of Makassar city surrounded by many big shops, several restaurants and several private offices.

We can see from the out side there is a large a parking area. It is a big rectangular and it divides become two parts. At the right side special for car and at the left side special for motorcycle. Between of them there is an alleyway toward door of diamond mall. There many vehicles and people in this place.

If we have passed the portal or door of diamond mall, we will enter a square roomful of AC, good flash light so we will enjoy shopping in this place. Beside of this room there are two restaurant fast food. Both of the restaurants has transparent wall made by glass so we can see customers of the restaurant from the out side. We can see business of all servant to server their costumer.

After pass this room, we will past short stair toward place of many stands. Most of the stands are rectangular and most of them are and long wall, just separated by thin wall so the stand turn in to the several stands, and most of the stand’s wall are made by gals so we can see item from the display window of the stand. Every stand is designed differently each other depend on the items they sell. For example: shoes stand. In this stand there are several shoes rack to display shoes who will be sell. The next example is dread stand, in this stand there are too much hanger to displays item such as dress, T-sirt, sweater etc. in this stand there is as mall square from to try item who will be buy. At the inside of this room there is a big mirror in its wall.

In Diamond mall there is a basement and it is function as supermarket. It is very larger room with good flash light. There are many big rack in this room for display all kinds item. There are all main thing such rice, vegetables, meat, sugar until electronics things such as television, refrigerator, iron, etc. so this place we can hear buzz of conversation caused by customer who visited this place.

Diamond Mall is a good place for spend the weekend because we can see all thing in this place. As heart of the department store, it always attend something is new, so it is become one of big crowded place in Makassar city.