Descriptive and Narrative Essays by Nurrahmi Z (3C Class)

NURRAHMI Z. WRITING III

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III C

NARRATIVE ESSAY

Outline : Tragedy of Nurdin

Intro :

Ø It was all about Nurdin

Ø It was all about Nurdin’s surrounding

Body :

Ø It was during the acf

Ø After the accident

Conclusion :

Ø Family and people responds

Nurdin was a success businessman. He was from Sengkang. He was a father from his six children. He made own business in his home. He sold many things like rice, paraffin and many more about our daily needs. He lived in Banta – bantaeng gank 8 number 8. his wife and children also helped him Buton accident made all over.

In left side of his home. There was a business man too. But Nurdin was more kind than his neighbour that’s way most people there liked to buy everything in Nurdin.

On may 10 1999 it was a tragedy day from him and his family. It is was about 02.00 a.m. there were three robbers come to his house. He suddenly wake up at that night because he heard something from out side. He tried to hit one of them. He was killed. His wife wake up and tried to help her housband but she also got injure because she helped robber’s gun

After they Nurdin save falling. They run away. His wife and their children cried and screamed up to invite people around them. Many people come and took him to hospital. He died in the middle of the way. Unfortunately his children were fine without any injure but his wife had to stayed in hospital because of injure.

Everybody felt sad because they lost of kind person. His wife, family and most people around them wer suspicrous that his neighbour was an actor of that crime. Because of business competition. But his wife didn’t wont to make this problem belong. She though that it was all destinies from Alla SWT.

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Outline : Twilight in campus

Intro :

- it is about 05.00 pm

Body :

§ Most student house gone

§ it is about canteen

§ Mr. Abbas is a cleaning service

§ Excerasing from drama’s

§ The campus is going to be quite

§ Preparation before tomorrow comes

It is about 05.00 pm. On a peace twilight in campus. The sun in far a way on the west is still gives it is ray by trees. The ray get sometimes makes us feel hot in afternoon. But now I feel so warm and soft like a sunrises in malino village.

When time like this most student have gone to their homes. But several student who lives in dormitory are still in campus. There is no more guitar sound which is played of student while waiting their turn to study according to their schedule.

The canteens are about five meters from campus. In always open for hungry student of full student to come in or go out since morning. Now only once a time is open. If any student open the door of canteen, they look so pale and tired after following study since morning. Of course the sellers feell satisfied to get much money bring to their homes even though one side they fell tired

In my surrounding I hear clearly sound of broom. Mr. Abbas is cleaning the roo. He can clean the room and garden enjoyable without student’s habbit, like walk around from one place to another place. As an authority of campus. Some of officer are busy to prepare everything before coming home. Some student also playing football.

In f29 room the right side of me I hear a conversation like debate. Im fact members of drama are exercising their selves for next show in the last week of February. Yudi’s voice is a leader of that club. He gives a sign or comment to his member.

Pak. Abbas has just cleaned the campus. Sun is almost gone from roof of f’s building. It is about 50 meters from my face take around in a across the road. Several minutes more this building is going to crowded because student from diploma program finish in 06.00 a.m. it is no longer time. The campus is gonna to more quite. Security who stay in the pos from morning ready to go home too while waiting for next security coming. Campus are shine in many shapes of room.

Most canteen are closed on 08.00 a.m. Every body has gone. The lecturer, officer, seller and many more will together with their family, kidding, eating and taking a rest. And I am in my home now while my campus sleeps for all night to assemble the power to face students hobbit of authority of this campus who always became stronger in everyday.