Narrative and Descriptive Essays by Fatmawati (III C class)

(Narrative Essay by Fatmawati. B // 10535 1934 06 // III C // Group 2)

DJAELANI

This story was begun with Mrs. Abdullah bore a child at the simple hospital in Makassar. It was a simple hospital because it wasn’t too big and its cost was cheaper than others. Three days later, Mr. and Mrs. Abdullah went back to their home. After that, they held “AQIQAH”, they killed two goats for their son and gave him a nice name. His name is Djaelani. Mrs. Abdullah always gave a mother’s milk to him and he became their beloved son.

Djaelani became health because a mother’s milk. He was a funny and satisfied to play with a simple toy which made of plastic. When he entered school, he always went to school by foot with his friends. He studied many lessons at school, beside that Mr. Abdullah also gave the religion lesson to him and guided to put into practice.

Every Friday, Djaelani went to Mosque on time to got the front row because he became a devout person. After nine years in primary school, he transferred to general school for three years and graduated with the excellent grade. Next, he followed SPMB and he was accepted in Medical Faculty.

After graduated in Medical Faculty, he followed a test as a civil servant and he was accepted. He got a job in one of clinic in Makassar. Dr. Djaelani always led the society within put Islam teaching inyo practice. So, religion and social life in that place frontier. A year later, he met with his soulmate and they decided to get married. His wife is a Moslem woman, a Master of Pharmacy. Her name is Aisyah.

Dr. Djaelani and Aisyah always spend their some money for saving. Every month, they send some money to their parents for living cost. Also they built a new house for their parents. And finally, Dr. Djaelani and his wife invited their parents to go to Mecca. Everything they had done, they always done something to make their parents happy.

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Topic : Surabi’s Diner

Introduction :

- Located in Cendrawasih Street

- Crowded at night

Thesis : It is he only one diner

Body :

- Surabi is a cake

- Cheaper and delicious

- Friendly welcome

- Cozy atmosphere

Concluding : A family and friends gathering.

SURABI’S DINER

Surabi’s diner is located on Cendrawasih Street, one of busy streets in Makassar. There are many restaurants, schools, and commercial building on the street. This place is opened in the afternoon until at midnight. Usually, it is crowded in the evening. There are many people go to there because it is the only one Surabi diner Makassar.

Surabi is a cake. It is made of flour, milk, sugar, and salt. Then pour in the cookie mold and roast on the charcoal. And then choose its toping. There are chocolate, cheese, milk, peanut, meat with chillie sauce, and etc. its price is cheap, just Rp. 2,000.-. And also it is delicious. This cake is familiar in Bandung, so its owner wants to introduce it in Makassar. In fact, everyone in Makassar like it.

When you go to this place, you will find the entrance door. It is one the left side. When you arrive, you will get a friendly welcome from its waiter. Then you can choose the table that you want to use. The table is on the right side and inside. On the table, there are spoon, fork, a candle light and tissue. Its atmosphere is cozy and the light is not too bright. So, it become so romantic and you’ll feel comfortable.

The diner is an alternative choice when you want to spend your time. You can eat a delicious cake. And also, this place is suitable for family and friends. You can talk whatever until midnight without scare to thrown out. You can held your party too and of course, you can add up many friends.