Class F of Writing III by Nurusyari'ah MD.

NURUSSYARI'AH MAULIATY DARWIN

10535 2060 06

III F

THE NARRATIVE COMPOSITION

Outline

Topic :
The Rain Made BTN Pelita Asri Flooded

Introduction :
-The time of the floods happened

-The condition before floods

Body :
-At the beginning of floods
People surprised with the flood
Some people tried to save their things and to found a safe place.
-The condition after the rain stopped
Some children fell asleep in the mosque.
Some mother cried and the men still tried to safe their things.
-The condition after the flood reduced.
People came back home
They cleaned their house together from the rubbish and the puddle of mud.

Conclusion :
-People hope there is no flood again
-People realize that the most problem causing the flood are rubbish and bad irrigation.
-People hope this flood didn't bring a new disease

THE RAIN MADE BTN PELITA ASRI FLOODED

Sunday morning, January 311 2008 was a had day for people who live in BTN Pelita Asri. Last night the rain fell down hard steadily. My family and I were fell asleep. There was no night activity because of the hard rain. Suddenly, my father shouted when he got up. I didn't know what happened. And then I found my foot was in water. It was floods.

People in RTN Pelita Asri never thought that it would he flood. The hard rain at night just made the people slept well. They already knew that their houses were flooded at down when they got up. People became shouted from house to house. My family was surprised with this flood. We got up sooner to safe our life.

Some of the people tried to safe their things and to find a good place. We didn't know what we had to do. We just could save what we could save. Some people who couldn't save their things cried. Their electronic tools, like TV set, radio, computer, etc were sunk. Several people tried to find their nearest family as the best place to stay for a moment. My family and I came to the nearest mosque to safe our things. Some people also chose this place to stay for a moment until the flood was reduced.

After several hours, the rain stopped. We couldn't do anything. The children fell asleep in the mosque. Some mothers still cried and the men still tried to save their things from the flood. They carried what they could safe and brought it to the safe place.

At eleven o'clock, the flood was reduced and we could back home. We clean our house from the rubbish brought by the flood. My mother and I swept the floor and cleaned it from the puddle of mud. My father and my brother brought back the things we could safe. Some people did as we did. They cleaned their house and fixed their irrigation. At four o'clock in the afternoon, everything became well. There was no flood again. People together fix the irrigation because the flood happened caused by the bad irrigation. There was much rubbish spread away in the irrigation.

People hope there is no flood again. If it happens again, it will be people panic. Now the one of a big problem in Indonesia is flood. So, In the future we will make good irrigation and there is no rubbish in all of area. Because the people realize that the most problem causing the flood are rubbish and bad irrigation. So, we all hope this flood didn't bring a new disease.

NURUSSYARI'AH MAULIATY DARWIN

10535 2060 06

III F

DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITION

Outline

Topic : 21

Introduction :
- Panakukang Street , Makassar
- A big movie in Panakukang square
- New cinema

Body :

• Crowded area
• Security in the door
• Systematic chairs in the square place
• Big flat, sound systems

Conclusion :
- Many film that show up Comfortable

- Comfortable
- We can spent our vacation

21

Makassar is a big city in South Sulawesi. It is very busy. It consists of many streets. One of the crowded streets in Makassar is Panakukang street. In this street we can see there are many shops. One of the shops is a Diamond. It is a very famous mall in Panakukang Street. There are many people come there, not only for shopping but also watching because in this mall there is a cinema called 21. It is a big movie in panakukang square.

In front of the 21 there many toys game. Many people want to play there. On Sunday there are many people come there playing games and watching a cinema. Perhaps it is caused by at the Sunday is holiday, so the place will be more crowded. Many people come there to spent their free time. Because the place don't make us bored.

All of the pictures of cinema must hang in area 21, so before we watch a cinema we can choose a cinema that we like. And then we must order a chair where we will sit later. After you do it, the worker will give you a ticket. And then the ticket must be showed to security and then they will inspect your ticket. After that, you can enter in that place. One by one enter it and In front of the door there are some securities to keep safety there, so, we must queue.

If the security allows you enter it, you must past hallway. Exactly you can not see anything. The place is very dark. You must call a worker there to accompany until you can see light. And then you can see the shape of the place is square. And then you feel cool because the place full of AC

After past in hallway, we will see systematic chairs in the square place. The chairs very comfortable to sit in each chair there are numbers. It numbers behind the chairs. So we can't sit in whatever chairs we wanted. Because every body has the own number. However there in an exception if there are only few people. We can choose a place to sit.

In front of the chairs there is a big flat to show the cinema. The cinema is look like real, because the picture is very big. And then the place has many sound systems. It is on the left and right side of the chair where we sit. All of tools are very modern with high technology

It is going the cinema 21. It is very pleasant to go 21 cinema. It is very crowded because there are many toys game. In front of beside that will fell safe because there are some security in the door. And that last will fell comfortable because systematic chairs in the square place. So we will enjoy watching without disturbing some one in front of us. And then we can spent our free times and vacation there.