Sabtu, 15 Maret 2008

WRITING III BY HAMID (3F CLASS)

Nama : Hamid

Reg. No : 10535 2087 06

Class : III F


Mr. Gunawan’s Family

Junus and wili are Mr. and Mrs. Gunawan’s sons the both are Fifteen and twelve years old their family belong to the aristocratic class. Every day, their family always serve neat as meal menu. Even though Junus and Wili are from wealthy family, but they have many problem internasional their life. One of them is less of their parents attention. Every day, the both must obey all of their parents command. Whatever their parents command for them, they must obey it. No chance for them, gather with their friends.

One day, their family had been lack of the meat. Their parents commanded them to hunt wild animals. When they went art to hunt, one they way, they met two blind men that were seeking their sticks that had been failed. The both asked them, to lift their stick, but they did not care, what were tow men asking. Until the middle of forest, they took rest a moment to prepare their rifle. After wards continued for hunting. But at thet moment. Almost a day he hunted, he did not got one of wild animal. The both regretted and decided to go back. Till at home, their parents were very angry, because their Joni, did not succeed to shoot one wild animal. As xxxxx, their parents recommended them to do it again, at the next day.

At the next day, Junus went out alone for hunting to fulfill the promise of his parents. He forbade his younger brother to follow him. He was walking internasional the woods carrying his rifle, when suddenly, from behind some frees, he heard a tiger growl. His hunter’s intuition told him to get ready to shoot. He hid behind a big rock and lay quietly with his rifle ready to fire. He waited for some time, but there was no sign of the tiger at all. The wind was blowing softly, and it made Junus feel rather sleepy ; so sleepy that at the very moment the tiger appeared sight internasional front of him, he was so an prepared that he could not reaet properly. He dropped his difle and fried escaped from the tiger. If was too late of him to fight animal as it was already on top of him. Strangely enough when he did not show any sigh of life, the tiger suddenly lost interest and left him badly wended. He was unemcions and had lost a lot of blood. Even though his calf wended, he still efforted to go back.

Until at home his parents were getting out. Lucky, there was Willi at home. He panicked with Junus condition. Immediately, he bandaged his old brother calf. After wards, they went to hospital to cure Junus’s wound.

When their parents arrive at home, they saw red spots on floor Mrs. Gunawan shouted and called hers sons, but no answer. Since at that moment, their parents began aware and thought, “possible it was accursed caused their boats. No aware, Mrs Gunawan wert briskets of fears. She regretted all her treat for her sons. When she was weeping, her sons approached her and knelt internasional rant of her, and said “forgave us, mamma!”. And even she embraced them

Junus and Willi are breed of aristocratic class, their family in elide wealthy family internasional their village. Even though like it, the both never feel happy internasional their life, it caused by their parents attitude that never give freedom for them.

Obviously, wealth will not make every body happy internasional their life. But something make same are happy, is freedom.


Name : Hamid

Reg. No : 10535 2087 06

“ANGGREK”

Anggrek was located internasional interior of Ende (Flores) village, it was situated among three hill with huge area 4.000 m2 it was decorated by beautiful panorama from entrance until behind whole are crowded by anggrek flowers, the people call this place is “Taman Anggrek”.

It was not only decorated by anggrek flowers, but also was decorated by hundred of casuarinas free. Casuarinas were planted at the edge of park. At entrance, some of casuarinas free were planted and farmed like a heat design. Each casuarinas were installed electric light, and chand olier fill top of it. Under of casuarinas frees are planted various kinds of anggrek flowers. It make the situation of “Taman Anggrek” was move romantic. Something that was most romantic, where, there have various kinds of butterfly. They were dancing, wherever the guests took walk.

Inside, there was crowded by million of Anggrek flowers and other flowers that always smile every corner of park. But this conditions was different with butterfly, they were dancing internasional the air. Some time they rested near same wild flowers. Mean uhile, birds were playfully flying and singing around of park. As beautiful place, it was freshened existence of beringin internasional frees, that stand among million of anggrek and wild flowers. Under of beringin frees was constructed bungalows it is for the guests that want to take rest and enjoy the fresh-air. Between a bungalow with other bungalow were constructed three fish pond. It was constructed for visitors that like fishing.

At behind, the situation was almost equal with inside behind was decorated three hotel and restaurant. They are very beautiful. Hotel have four floor and restaurant have unique faste cocking it was consternated on slops of hill. Almost each corner of hotels and restaurants installed pots of anggrek flower. Because with condition as like it, the visitors never bored to visit this place.

Anggrek is the name of one of park internasional Ende village it was constructed on hinge area. It is about 4.000 m2. it is one of parks have beautiful panorama. Because it was located among three hill. It is usually crowded by visitors. No one felt bored, if they were internasional Taman anggrek. Each visitor that visited there, always said “it is really beautiful place”

Until now. Taman Anggrek is never lonely visited by tourists they are from different country, but average, they are from Australia and Europa. And it is become one of popular tourist object at Flores Island, especially Ende Village.

WRITING III BY AGUS SALIM (3F CLASS)

Name : Agussalim

Class : III F

Reg. no. : 10535 2055 06

Group : III

Individual tasks

Descriptive essay

Multimedia library

Makassar is large city located in the eastern of Indonesia. In other that, it’s also as a tourist destination city because there are many interesting places which can be visited by the tourists. Makassar is a tourist and education city. It’s signed by the various education institutes such as schools, collages, course places and the most important is library. It is the source of knowledge. One of the most visited library by people is multimedia library. It’s located in jl. Sultan alauddin , in front of Unismuh. Beside large, it has also a beautiful park.

Multimedia library located in front of Unismuh. It different from others because it has large area, beautiful park and rest places that are used by students to hold meeting club or gathering with their friends. In front side, there is a security post and a gate. After passed the gate, you can see beautiful garden around it road. It decorated by the various of plants and flowers, like hibiscuss, rose, casuarine trees, palm trees, and grass that grow around the plants. There are two small buildings around the park . it’s floors made of tile / ceramics, and it’s roof made of roof – tile. And it’s measurement more and less 12 m2.

You can see a wall that is decorated by rising painting beside the library. There is also a big mango tree in front of the library that is usually using by people for parking . the people also hold a meeting under the tree because it is cold and comfortable.

Inside the library, there is a miniature of Makassar. If you enter to the library, your feeling become fresh and cold because of air conditioner. In front side of the library, there is a lavatory for male and female. In the next room, there is a made of wood. It is used to store our bag and other things we bring. On the left side of this room, there is an internet room where consists of seven units of computer. The right side, there some units of computer, desks, and tables that is used by the staff.

In the in the next room is reading room. It consists of many kinds of books, such as religion books, science, literatures, tribe and art books. These books are arranged as tidy as possible and parallel each other. The tables for reading are arranged parallel too, so we can study well and read with enjoy.

Library is a place where you can find something you want to increase your knowledge. Multimedia is one of the library in makassar that is visited by students because it’s place is strategic , large, and comfortable, and also enable for each visitors can study well.

NARRATIVE ESSAY

INDONESIA IS CRYING

Indonesia is a development country with more than 200 million people. Indonesia is a democratic country has fertile land and over flow of natural resources. It has been independent in 1945 and has some changes in many sectors especially I development sector. However, since president soeharto retired as Indonesian president meny problems kept coming . staple supplies cost increase and many trouble like disaster come to our country.

In 1998, demomnstration was happened in everywhere. They demanded president soeharto to descend from his duty. Finally, on may 1998, president soeharto retired and replaced by his vice namely Bj. Habibie. Under habibie’s administration, politics and economics situation became stable. Politics and economics stabilization was better than before. But, it’s only for several months. After Bj. Habibie replaced by president Abdurrahman wahid ( gusdur ) politics and economics situation were not stable anymore. Conflicts and riots were happened in many places.

In the next year, Indonesia was suffer again. There were many disaster were happened from sabang to merauke. For instance : earth quake in java island, tsunami, flood and landslide. Even, airplane accident was happened every year. As the matter of fact, Indonesia was being famous as disaster country. flood and landslide were happened every year and became annual agenda for Indonesia. The government has tried to solve these problems. There are many efforts have been done, for example : socialization of reforestation, asking people to keep forest, and making a dike to prevent the flood. But there is no result. Every year, disaster happened more and more.

In 2002, Indonesia was caused a stir with bomb Bali I and II that defeated tend of local and foreign tourists. It made foreign tourists afraid to visit Indonesia because they thought about their safety. Ever after, Indonesia was being famous as terrorist country, because there were many terrorism action in some p[laces, like explosion bomb in JW. Marriot, kuningan bomb, and also makassar bomb that defeated tens people.

In 2004, the oil drilling of lapindo brantas was broken down. As a result, some places around the factory were soaked by mud. Even, many houses sank in ronokenongo, sidoarjo. It made the means of transportation couldn’t be used. The government and the owner of lapindo namely bakrie group tried to find solution of this problem. Many efforts had been done but there were no result. And it was happened until now. Our nation suffering is not only that, corruption and nepotism that is done by the government functionaries make our nation more suffer. These greedy functionaries make society’s live became more difficult than before.

Actually, Indonesia has many natural resources. But everything has been lost because of human greed. Natural disaster become annual agenda in Indonesia. May be, this is a temptation or warning from our god ALLAH SWT because of our greed and faults. Indonesia has got three awards, they are the most corrupt nation, terrorist country, and disaster country. Whose fault is it ? this is a really difficult question to answer. We just expect to our god , so that our country can be prosperous and far from disaster.

Descriptive and Narrative Essays by Nurrahmi Z (3C Class)

NURRAHMI Z. WRITING III

10535 2890 07

III C

NARRATIVE ESSAY

Outline : Tragedy of Nurdin

Intro :

Ø It was all about Nurdin

Ø It was all about Nurdin’s surrounding

Body :

Ø It was during the acf

Ø After the accident

Conclusion :

Ø Family and people responds

Nurdin was a success businessman. He was from Sengkang. He was a father from his six children. He made own business in his home. He sold many things like rice, paraffin and many more about our daily needs. He lived in Banta – bantaeng gank 8 number 8. his wife and children also helped him Buton accident made all over.

In left side of his home. There was a business man too. But Nurdin was more kind than his neighbour that’s way most people there liked to buy everything in Nurdin.

On may 10 1999 it was a tragedy day from him and his family. It is was about 02.00 a.m. there were three robbers come to his house. He suddenly wake up at that night because he heard something from out side. He tried to hit one of them. He was killed. His wife wake up and tried to help her housband but she also got injure because she helped robber’s gun

After they Nurdin save falling. They run away. His wife and their children cried and screamed up to invite people around them. Many people come and took him to hospital. He died in the middle of the way. Unfortunately his children were fine without any injure but his wife had to stayed in hospital because of injure.

Everybody felt sad because they lost of kind person. His wife, family and most people around them wer suspicrous that his neighbour was an actor of that crime. Because of business competition. But his wife didn’t wont to make this problem belong. She though that it was all destinies from Alla SWT.

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Outline : Twilight in campus

Intro :

- it is about 05.00 pm

Body :

§ Most student house gone

§ it is about canteen

§ Mr. Abbas is a cleaning service

§ Excerasing from drama’s

§ The campus is going to be quite

§ Preparation before tomorrow comes

It is about 05.00 pm. On a peace twilight in campus. The sun in far a way on the west is still gives it is ray by trees. The ray get sometimes makes us feel hot in afternoon. But now I feel so warm and soft like a sunrises in malino village.

When time like this most student have gone to their homes. But several student who lives in dormitory are still in campus. There is no more guitar sound which is played of student while waiting their turn to study according to their schedule.

The canteens are about five meters from campus. In always open for hungry student of full student to come in or go out since morning. Now only once a time is open. If any student open the door of canteen, they look so pale and tired after following study since morning. Of course the sellers feell satisfied to get much money bring to their homes even though one side they fell tired

In my surrounding I hear clearly sound of broom. Mr. Abbas is cleaning the roo. He can clean the room and garden enjoyable without student’s habbit, like walk around from one place to another place. As an authority of campus. Some of officer are busy to prepare everything before coming home. Some student also playing football.

In f29 room the right side of me I hear a conversation like debate. Im fact members of drama are exercising their selves for next show in the last week of February. Yudi’s voice is a leader of that club. He gives a sign or comment to his member.

Pak. Abbas has just cleaned the campus. Sun is almost gone from roof of f’s building. It is about 50 meters from my face take around in a across the road. Several minutes more this building is going to crowded because student from diploma program finish in 06.00 a.m. it is no longer time. The campus is gonna to more quite. Security who stay in the pos from morning ready to go home too while waiting for next security coming. Campus are shine in many shapes of room.

Most canteen are closed on 08.00 a.m. Every body has gone. The lecturer, officer, seller and many more will together with their family, kidding, eating and taking a rest. And I am in my home now while my campus sleeps for all night to assemble the power to face students hobbit of authority of this campus who always became stronger in everyday.

Descriptive and Narrative Essays by Herlina Sutarman (3C Class)

SUHERNI SUTARMAN WRITING III

10535 2889
III C

NARASI

EARTH QUAKE AT BIMA

OUTLINE

The Earth Quake at Bima destroyed about 500 houses

INTRO

Before the natural disaster

The time accident

BODY

During the accident

The earth quake signal

The people ran out from their houses

After the earth quake

It was about 500 houses destroyed

Several houses after the earth quake

Some of them made tents

The ambulance comes

CONCLUSION

The victims’ hopes

Before The earth quake people who live around of central earth quake felt a little tremble,but they was unpanic and people sailed on the sea also felt the change of water,it was suddenly become recedy.

The accident was happened suddenly at the time when the people slept about 12.pm and the earth quake was also happened as long as twice with 6,8 richte scala

When earth quake,people was near the from the central of earth quake felt big shake.Earth was like sa a ball on the glass and we were shaking.

Many buildings and and houses were damaged,the people run out from their house,they had not a chance to take their chidren.In their mind,they just thought to seek the high places,they afraid if tsunami come,specially the people live near the sea.

After the earth quake there were about 500 units houses and buildings damaged,many victims from the earth quake,specially chids and oldman.

After the accident,many people seek their family,because when the accident happened they were careless,actually it was a basic attitude from every human,if they felt their life in bad situation they choose how to save their life itself.They seek their family everywere,there is find their family safe and pass away.

While the people tried to find their family some of them made tents to evacuated the victims which is get hurt,the tents made from plastic,they used it for a while because they afraid to back to their house,and gives them first aid.

They were not happy to welcome the sunshine anymore,they felt sad because they not find their family,they can go to school again,the loss their memories when they playing with their friends,and there are many kinds that made them felt sad.

It is need along time to wait the ambulance comes,because to arrive these place need many times because many damaged in along way,just a little ambulance come it not enough to evacuated all victims,they needed clothes,food,medicine.support to give up again,they ned pray and helped from us to face up their life on the future.

Finally they just hoped to the more patient to face up these accident,the man purposes the GODsdisposses.They hope the government can give them Fun to repaired their infrastruktur and they can do activity usual.

Descriptive Essay

Outline : the beautiful scenary in tontonan mountain

Intro :

§ Why it is called tontonan

§ Located

§ Tontonan surroundings

Body :

  • The scenary around the mountain
  • The vanity of plant and food
  • The facility

Conclusion :

  • Suggestion
  • Critism

THE BEAUTIFUL SCENARY IN TONTONAN MOUNTAIN

According to the people who lived in this place, why is people called tontonan it means a place for watching because it has unique shape like a box, flat and sly and many people said this is an ancestor television. And if we want to go to the top of this mountainwe walk beside this mountain.

Maybe you have a guestion how to get there ?? if you start from makassar the distance abaout 350 kilometres and need 7 hours to arrive and you must pay 50.000 rupiahs, you go there by bus or motorcycle but I am suggestion it better you use bus. In order that if you arrive there you did not tire to doing activity. The located this place in capital of enrekang. In th north bother with tana toraja, in the south sulawesi bother with sidrap, the east with pinrang, and in the west other with luwu. Rhe wide is area about 1.786.

In there we can find the beautiful scenary, the unique mountain, andall kinds of plant and food, and we can dong your hobby like swimming, fishing, and climbing mountain.

In tontonan we can see the unique shape of mountain. In the midlle of this place there are all kinds of grave shape like ship, pig, and all the ancient house. There are influence from the custom of toraja.

Under this place there areriver with the big stone and fresh water, it there prepared pond for swim and also for fishing.

Around this placewe can find all kinds of plant like jati, bitti, gamal, clove tree, cocoa, salak true, mango, langsa and durian and also there are many kindsfood was prepared by small shop like bajek, deppa tori, dangke and tuak. And also we can ind all kinds of souvenir is made from bamboo tree.

The facilities is prepared by the owner like lodge such as custom house there, swimming pool, place for fishing, equipment for mountain climbing, guide, souvenir shop, canteen, parking area.

For the government or the manager to improve the facilities specifik for foreign visitor. Make a booklet and cooperate with the mass media, electronic and also with non government and the last with agent travel. You should visit it in summer so that easier to climb, once again don’t come in rainy because dangerous it caused the river flood and sly.

Descriptive and Narrative Essays by Suherni (III C Class)

SUHERNI WRITING III

10535 2888 07

III C


Narrative Essay

The Eartquake at bima Destroying about 500 Houses

Intro :

- Before the natural disaster

- The time of the accident

Body :

- During the eartquake

  • The earthquake’s signal
  • The people run out from their house

After the earthquake

  • About 500 houses destroyed
  • Many people got several time

- Several hours after the earthquake

  • Some people looked for their family
  • Some of them made tents
  • The ambulance come

Conclusion : this accident made people realize how dangerous the earthquake As

Brightly night and silence night makes all of the people in bima feel happy, but suddenly that night change become a nightmare because it happen a big explosion. As 12 pm everyone panic with a big guestion in their mines. What up ?? they all wake up with a confusing face and scare because they hearded earthquake signal. One of them scream and say earthquake is happen run ….run….. run. The sound hearded from the sia. At moment all of peole run out from their house. They all to the valley or upland plain to save their life because they are afraid about sunami.

Tomorrow morning all people are surprised because earthquake was destroyed 500 houses of society. Many peple got several pain and the death. Several hours after the earthquake, some people looked for their family and ask about their condition. Some of them made tents and life their for the time being, because their houses had broken. In other side, some of the ambulance come to give first Aid for the people who’s need a help. They felt sad because they would not find their family. They needed clithes, food, and medicine.

It must be made people realize how dangerous it. So it will make all people always in be a wake and learn more about what is really the earthquake and they will know what wiil they do if they earthquake it happen again.

They government must early to over come the victim of earthquake and try to anticipate before earthquake happening by give information from BMG. They need much money to repair their house and general facilities. They need pysicater to build spirit and lose traumatic. So they start your life and smiling.


Descriptive

Outline : Sulili Swimming Pool

Introduction :

· The lcaton of sulili swimming pool

· How to get there

Body :

· The scenery of the destination

· The facilities that be served

Conclusion :

· Sulili swimming pool is a beautiful place

· The critical and suggestion

SULILI SWIMMING POOL

Sulili swimming pool is one of tourism places in pinrang. Is is lies about 5 kilometres from central regency. It is swimming region, because it has two swimming pols. There is for adult and children one. Sulili is natural beautiful place.

It is really beautiful place for swimming and sightseeing. If we are in pinrang we just take public transformation or motorcycle to get there. But if you are in makassar we have to find Pinrang first and take panter or bus. Don’t forget to buy a ticket at there.

We can also see a mineral water source in several meters from swimming pool. In there we see the grasses are dry and burned, because of vulcance pressure if we put an eggit is sooner be cooked. But it is limited area because for bidden for childrens.

After seeing the mineral water source, next we could spend our time to swim on the pool. In the left side of swimming pool, childrens are playing in garden park. We could take a rest in mini haouse rent. If we bring supply we just find in the mini house, but if we don’t bring anything we could buy in café or canteen which is repaired. There is a mushallah, when playing time is coming we may get there. There are toilets if we to clean our body and change dresses.

Sulilili swimming pool is a beautiful place to visit. We can spend our weekend or holiday in there, because it is enjoing place and complete place. And aroud of this place we can see the beautiful scenary and also souvenir shop.I think that you did not be disappointed if you visiting this place,and I am guaranted you wold satisfiyed.

There is not international facilities are needed by foreign tourism like restoran and hotels. And I hope the government of Pinrang regency can bulding it better, because it cay give main capital to government.

Jumat, 14 Maret 2008

Narrative and Descriptive Essays by St. Halijah (III C Class)

By : ST. HALIJAH

10535 2891 07

Class III C (WRITING III)

Naration

Topic :”The earthquaqe at Bima Destroyed about 500 houses”

Intro : Before the natural disaster

-The time the accident

Body : During the earthquaqe

-The earthquaqe’s signal

-The people run out from their house

After the earthquaqe

-About 500houses destroyed

-Many people got several paint

Several hours after the earthquaqe

-Some people looked for their family

-Some of them made tents

-The ambulance come

Conclusion :The goverment should faster help and the evacuated the victim

The earthquaqe at Bima destroying about 500 houses

The condition at Bima regency was quiet before the natural disaster. The people usually do activities like ordinary. There go to office. They go to the market. the children usually go to school, from kindergarden until high school. The house wife do their house hold.they do the activities start in the morning until the night.it is a costum in our country.

There is not any sign that it will be earthquaqe because they were sleeping and this happened in the middle of the night.the earthquaqe was happened about 12 p.m .the earth is tremble few a minutes. it made the trees overthrow and the houses were destroyed and coused many victim. Eventhough there were many people run out from their houses. The people we confuse of the eartquaqe. In their mind they were afraid if there a tsunami because the earthquaqe was happened in the sea. We know that the earthquaqe was 6,8 richter scala.

The earthquaqe caused the destruction about 500 houses and the government prepared the tents for the victim of the earthquaqe. Many people were injured until the ambulance came. So many people had a bad injured.

We shoud help them and than the goverment have to help them. I think this was lesson people to avoid a lot of victim. They have to realize has dangerous the earthquaqe.

There are some dangerous of earthquae like the houses destroyed, the people got several paint and died. The government is suggested to more attention for them and also people near sea, river and mountain. The government should more faster help and evacuated the victim.


Description

Out line : “Sembilan island”

Introuduction :- location of the Sembilan Island

-How go to there

-General view of Sembilan Island

Body : - the scenery island before reaching the destination

-The scenery of destination

-Totally visitors.

-The facilities that be served

Conclusion : Sembilan Island is beautiful place

-People something make many activities

-Consist suggestion and critic

Sembilan Island

SembilanIsland is located in Lappa. It has position in north Sinjai. It is has a Island region in Sinjai. There are some resorts that can make us interested to visited them. Like Kambuno,Lae-Lae Island and ect. The sembilan Island is a beautiful place. It has strategic position because near city. actuallyi it is very interesting for visited. We just take Pete-Pete until harbour the next take speed boat. If you live near tourism resort may bego by Lepa-Lepa to reach the place. During the way we will enjoy beautiful scene of city.

You can see some boots or sheeps like Lambo, Pinisi,Katintin, Lepa-lepa, and Speed boat. There some people with the difference activity in there. We can see find fishing by net of fish.
After crossing boats. We will see a beautiful island. It is sembilan Island. In the island you will find a beautiful sea scenery that interesting to see. In near from island. The water is green color and the far is blue one. the are some sheeps crossing begin the small until the big one.it can be seen in the morning until nigt. The scenery can be seen all side while standing in hill of island or base one. We can see scenery of the sunrises and sunset.
If you visited in the early morning you can find the scenery of the sunrises and sunset in the afternoon.there are some facilities that be served like hotel, motel, cottage, villa, rest place, shop houses, equipment swimming and fishing in the sea. Many visitors local and foreigners tourism come to this place.

Sembilan Island is a Beautiful place to visit people sometimes look for relaxation, food cheeper, inspiration and something different. To improve the main in capital the govermant suggested to set the available entrance fee for visitors. It is purposed to increase the constribution for tourism department. The main attention came from the rubbish along the beach.the visitors are still confused to waste their rubbish

Kamis, 13 Maret 2008

CLASS III F