NARRATIVE AND DESCRIPTIVE ESSAYS OF GROUP 3 OF C CLASS.

GROUP 3 : ALWAN HIDAYAT WRITING III
MUH. AQIL
RUDI M.
JAMALUDDIN
SYAFE’I

Narrative Essay

Topic : - Earthquake in Bima Destroying about 500 Hundreds Houses
Introduction : - Before the natural disaster
- The time of accident
Body : - During the earthquake
- The earthquake’s signal
- The people run out from their house
- After the earthquake
- About five hundred houses destroyed
- Many people got severe pain
- Several hours after the earthquake
- Some people looked for their family
- Some of them made tents
- The ambulance came
Conclusion : - This accident made people realize how dangerous the earthquake.
EARTHQUAKE IN BIMA
DESTROYING ABOUT 500 HUNDREDS HOUSES

It was on December 5th 2007 in Dompu, a fifteen kilometres village from Bima. All the villagers were fallen asleep instead of our family, and there was no activity around that time. Just some insects sang at night. The night was silent. Suddenly, at around 01.00 o’clock AM, the land was shaken hardly. An earthquake was up.
The earthquake happened suddenly when all people were fallen asleep. Our village was shaken hardly and make all the villagers woke up surprisingly. Some of them shouted “earthquake!, earthquake!”, My family and I ran out from the house trying to save our live. I didn’t know what we had to do. All the villagers ran away randomly and saved all they could save.
After around five minutes, the earthquake stopped shaking the village. About five hundreds houses were broken down. Most of the villagers were injured and some of them died fallen by their houses. Some mothers shouted and cried looking for their families. My family and I were saved. We tried to help other people in the darkness although none of the light was on.
After several hours, same people still tried to find their families. They came to see the broken down houses hoping that there were some villagers still alive. I tried to help the others by picking up some victims that we could save.
Not taking along time, the ambulances came. We helped them to pick up the victims. Some doctors and nurses tried to bandage the victims and gave some medicines to them. Some of them who got severe pain tried to be driven to nearest hospital.
This was the second time the earthquake happened in our village. But it was the most one. We hope this accident doesn’t happen again. And it makes us realize how dangerous the earthquake is. Now, the government has prepared all the possibility if the earthquake comes again. This accident becomes a worthy lesson and we hope it doesn’t happen again.


DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
Outline

Topic : - Parangloe Waterfall

Introduction : - Location
- General view of Parangloe

Body : - The scenery before reaching the destination.
- The scenery of the destination
- The condition of the destination
Conclusion : - Parangloe waterfall is a beautiful place
- People sometimes make a camping area around the waterfall

Description

PARANGLOE WATERFALL


Parangloe is one of sub districts in Gowa regency. It lies about 30 kilometres from Makassar. It is a mountainous region. There are some resorts that can make us interested to visit them, like Bili-bili Barrage, the biggest barrage in eastern of Indonesia, the swimming pool of Bili-bili, fishing place of lake Bili-bili, etc. But the most beautiful place that people rarely visit is Parangloe waterfall.
Parangloe waterfall is a natural beautiful place. It looks like a hidden place because it’s far from the street. But it’s ok. It’s really exciting for sightseeing. We just take pete-pete until the entrance and then, go by on foot for about a kilometre to reach the place. On the way you’ll feel the fresh air around you and see a beautiful scene of the forest. You also can see some scarce birds there.
After crossing the forest, you’ll see a small river with a beautiful waterfall at the end of it. That’s the Parangloe Waterfall. It’s a three-storey high waterfall. In the river you’ll find a natural pond. The water is so fresh and clear. So people can play together in it. Around the waterfall, there are some old big trees growing on the big stones. People can take a rest and lay down themselves
It is safe there. We don’t have to buy a single ticket to have fun. But there is no villa there. So it would be better if we make a camp around the river and make firewood at night. It’s really nice. About a half kilometre near the waterfall, there is a small village inhabited by friendly villagers. So if we need a help, just call them.
Parangloe waterfall is a beautiful place to visit. People sometimes make it as a camping area. And on summer, some people come to visit this waterfall just to spend their holiday.

Argumentative Essay

Topic : FORMULA MIK CONTAINS BACTERIA

Introduction :

- Everyone needs milk, especially for baby

- Milk is a primary nutrient for baby

- The research result of the scientists from Bandung Technology Institutes

Thesis : Formula milk is dangerous to consume now.

Body :

- People can be easy to find formula milk that contains of bacteria

- The bacteria can affect the baby nerves and its digestion

- The bacteria can be very dangerous for premature and abnormal baby.

Conclusion :

- The solution of using formula milk

- The invention reminds us to use mother milk as the best milk for baby.

FORMULA MILK CONTAINS BACTERIA

Every one needs milk, especially for babies. It is good for our health. It is the primary nutrient for baby to increase the baby growth, and give a good respond for them. Some kinds of milk are sold in the market, like formula milk, powder milk and liquid milk. All of them have been legal by the government. But now days, many people look scared to use milk for their babies, especially formula milk. It is caused by the invention of the scientists from Bandung Technology Institutes. They made a research of Formula milk that spread out in Indonesia. They found that the milk is dangerous to consume.

Formula milk is easy to find in the market. Some of them are nutrients for baby. The scientists indicate that there is a strange case of the baby growth now. So they make a research of the baby nutrients include of formula milk. They found that there are some bacteria contained in this milk. It means that there are many people use this milk that contains of bacteria.

These bacteria are a kind of achetobacter. This bacteria is not too dangerous for people, but not for babies. Although the effects of this bacteria are not happen at the time, but it can affect the babies’ nerves and can be dangerous in the future. It can also dangerous for babies’ digestion.

Formula milk is a primary nutrient for baby, but now it’s too dangerous especially for the premature baby. For this case, it can make the baby die. The bacteria will attack the abnormal digestion and make a chafe in the vital part of the internal body, like lung, intestine, and nerves.

Formula milk is dangerous to consume. But, it can be consume well if we make the milk in up 70⁰C- hot water. It can make the bacteria die. But it would be better if it is consumed by a healthy baby, not the premature or abnormal baby. This invention reminds us to use the mother milk as the best nutrient for the baby.