Jumat, 29 Februari 2008

Narrative and Descriptive Essays by Zulhaji (III C class)

NAMA: ZULHAJI WRITING III

NIM : 10535 1918 06.

CLASS : 3.C

TOPIC : COTO DAENG DINER.

INTRODOCTORY : - GENERAL LOCATED IS COTO DAENG

-NESTLY BETWEEN TWO MALL BUILDING AND NEW CIVIC

BUILDING.

-COTO DAENG DINER IS A TINY.

BODY : - THE SERVENT OF GOOD.

- SOUP AND FLESH COOKED THAT VERY DELICIOUS.

CONCLUSION : - THAT’S PLACE OPENED TWENTY FOUR NON STOP.

- IT’S CAN BE MEDICINE FOR PEOPLES ANEMIA SICK.

DESCRIPTIVE.

COTO DAENG DINER.

Everyday I get off the twenty bus on the same busy city block. Everyday central street bustles with activity. Commuters pass each other in parade they hurry, whether on foot or in dusty buses in whizzing cars. Shops and offices open, welcoming the throng. As some city has grown this block has change from a quite old neighborhood to busy commercial area. Modern building reach up towards the sunlight, shiny and sleek with one exeption. COTO DAENG DINER was here long before any of these new students and still remains the heart of the neighborhood.

COTO DAENG DINER is a tiny, rectangular wooden structure that looks like a railroad car. Its nestled between two mall building and the new civic building. Compared with them, the diner is shabby. The white paint is lightning. The roof misses a few shingles. At the right side of the diner two little toilet and place cool drink. To the left of the door are two big windows.

Their habit of welcoming people is they say a greeting before serving them the menus. Smiling waitress welcomes me, as does to each of her costumers. Waitress places heaping plate on the counter and empty ones into the tub of dirty dishes underneath. Soup and flesh cooked in the big pan, giving feel and delicious aroma.

At the night I see the same people sitting in the booths and at the counter. Voices blend together in a pleasant buzz costumers come and go often leaving creased sections tissue on the table and cigarette but on their way out, they wave at COTO DAENG. And more attractively the place is in open twenty four hours. And add more menus in the COTO DAENG DINER giving to serve special MAKASSAR. And not only that, those menus from COTO DAENG DINER can treat for anemia disease.

NAMA: ZULHAJI.

NIM : 10535 1918 06.

CLASS : 3.C.

TOPIC : DAVID BECKHAM.

INTRODUCTORY : - HISTORY ABOUT HIM WAS ON TOP OF THE WORLD.

BODY :- DAVID BECKHAM COULD ONLY AGAIN CAPTEN AN FOOTBALL SCHOLARSHIP.

- HER DREAM OF BECOMING A COACH.

CONCLUSION : - DAVID BECKHAM OPENED FOOTBALL SCHOOL.

NARRATIVE.

DAVID BECKHAM.

DAVID BECKHAM was on top of the world. He always gives take over to become goal, leading her football team to another victory. Real Madrid remained undefeated and still in first place in the city league. However, David Beckham specially excited match because two had been scouts from one local college at the game. If David Beckham could come back as a captain of football scholarship, he would be able to pursue her dream of becoming a coach.

Full of his high hope, David Beckham rushed home with her family or go to football school. He stopped suddenly when he noticed the pained expressions on his parents face. David Beckham shoots the ball at the hurdle with them, but he wasn’t prepared of the bad news they had to share. His father was being prayer from work for several days. His parents were hoping that David Beckham would be able to find a job after his career finish in football of the world.

David Beckham hopes crashed. Of course he would mind working but several days they have planning for opened football school in the city. And maybe he finished his career in the team and special football of the world.

Not taking a long time he starts his new work as a leader of football school. And next he opens a talent college for the children and next in the football school freely. After his success in developing football school, he makes several house poor and because that his family is proud for what he did. And they hope all effort will use for the next generation if the people general society.

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