Narrative and Descriptive Essays by Salmiah (III C Class)

SALMIAH WRITING III
III C
10535 1925 06

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Topic : Bhayangkara Hospital
Introductory : Location
General view of the hospital
Body : Inside the hospital
The rooms and their functions
The doctors and the nurses
Conclusion : A good servicing for the patients.

BHAYANGKARA HOSPITAL

Bhayangkara hospital lies on Jl. Letjen. Andi Mappaoddang, Makassar. It is a policeman hospital. Around it are roads, block of flats, food stalls, drugstore and a mosque. At the front side, there are two gates as the entrance and the exit of this hospital, a large parking area that separates car and motorcycle parking area, some small green trees and beautiful flowers. It is large, tidy and clean.
Step into the hospital, there is a post guard with a TV set on its corner. There are also a teller machine and a pharmacy room on the right side, a path that separates each ward. In front of each ward there are a small parking area and a small garden with flowers that can fresh our eyes. Every morning cleaning services sweep and mopped the hospital. Cleanliness is always kept.
A wide path in the middle divides the hospital into two parts. On the right side, a pharmacy, laboratory, radiology, and emergency room are located as the first ward. Every ward has some rooms. Then, the Garuda ward has two floors with many rooms for patients especially for men. Each room in this ward can be for one or two patients. Behind this ward, there is Merpati ward for women.
The left side, there are some wards. The Rajawali ward, it is for VIP class. Each room has complete equipments like a small living room, a TV set and air condition so the patients will feel comfortable. Next room, we’ll fin ICU room for emergency patients. It must be treated intensively. After getting better, they will be moved to treatment. Next ward is Ketilang ward. It is for child patients. On the back side, there is a mosque, ambulance, kitchen and parking area. Every ward has been completed with a special room for the nurses.
As one of good hospitals, many medical specialists are there. They are pediatricians, dentists, obstetricians, ophthalmologists, radiologists, general practitioners, and etc. they will check the patients every morning and give the medicine prescription. Some nurses always assist them. Every time, the nurses are ready to help the patients. They are kindly and friendly. They always give motivation so that the patients can get better.
Bhayangkara hospital is popular as a good hospital that giving a good service to the patients. The hospital always tries to improve their servicing and also add an extension to the hospital. Many people express their satisfaction to its service. They hope they can be more better and always better for the future.

NARRATIVE ESSAY
Topic : English Camp in Barru
Introduction :
- English camp is one of EDSA program
- Lajulo village in Barru has exciting place at around the mountain
- There are many interesting activities
Body :
- Prepare before going to Barru
- Pleasant journey
- Study at the open air
- Playing the games
- Spending night with English debate and drama
Conclusion :
- Togetherness and friendship
- Unforgettable experience

ENGLISH CAMP IN BARRU

Engilsh camp is one of English Department Student Association (EDSA) program. It is held at holiday of odd semester. The participants are English students, especially from the first semester. The last English camp was in Barru regency. It is in Lalujo village exactly. Lalujo has an exciting place around the mountain. There were many green trees with fresh air and beautiful scene. We stayed for five days. During there, many interesting activities already done by committee like games, drama, climbing the mountain, spending night and etc.
At 8:00 o’clock in the morning, all participants assemble in the campus. We were divided into some groups. Each group prepared and brought equipments like kitchen tools, tent, some food, etc. they brought a big duffle bag that contents many things for supplies. At 10:00 o’clock, we left the campus with two big buses. It’s about three hours from Makassar. My bus was noisy. During the journey, we all were singing songs. One of my friend brought a guitar. They were playing guitar one by one. We were very fun and happy. All along the road, we looked out the view. Sometimes I saw the rice fields, mountain area from distance, bridge, office, block of flats, and etc. in the bus, we also ate something like snack, cookies, and water. It was so tired journey but very pleasant.
We arrive about half past one. When got out of the bug, we saw interesting view. A large field was seen at top of the hill. Tat’s our camping area. It is around the green trees and a small river where the water flow from the mountain. The water is so clear and fresh. Around the river there are stone where we can sit while enjoy the the fresh air and exciting scene. The boys pitch the tents to the ground and the girls prepare the things, food and drink. There were some tents for the boys and the girls, a main tent for the committee. There were also some society houses around the area.
The first day, we were woken up by some birds singing and sunrise in the brightened morning. It was so cool, before starting activities, we had breakfast. We studied in the open air leaded by two steering committees who taught us how to describe a place. Everyday, we tried to speak English about everything. If not, we would get a punishment. We also played games, like puzzle, a contest to be a king and a queen. The rules, a boy was made up like a girl, the clothes and his style was like a girl. It was so funny. We also prayed together. At night, we made a camp fire in the middle of the ground. We spent the night with English debate and drama.
All participants and committees presented their story. We climb a hill together and saw the exciting scene at the top of the hill. Our eyes looked at the green trees spread everywhere.
The last day, we were sad leaving Lalijo village. Togetherness and friendship for five days in English camp would be remembered. Studying and laughing together were a moment that rarely I felt in my life. I also could have many friends from other classes. We would never know when this will happen again. It’s an unforgettable experience.